Improvements ~ First Edit

• One improvements is to make sure next time we film Paper Shop Dave is that we film more aspects of the band singing because looking back on our draft we actually haven’t captured many close ups of the lead singer which I think we need to do to get the highest grade possible.
• Another improvement we have identified is that we need to make the shots within the shed brighter as we think it simply looks too dull.
• Also looking back on our music video we have noticed that we have included numerous of zooming in and out shots which we didn’t intend to do because we definitely don’t want to include any of these movements as we find that it loses focus.
• We have also decided that we need to involve some sort of ambient sound at the beginning of the sequence as we think this will work and blend into the music much better especially because we think it will match the location accordingly to make the opening more efficient.